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Picture A Classical Word by ~blackred-GlassRose:iconblackred-GlassRose:





Capturing each passing moment with the beauty of words;
Capturing each passing emotion to fullest that I can,
My lyrical musings over the things that make up life.
Truly living is only found after you've been dead.
When my memory is a blank canvas with nothing but scars from the image that had once been, I can look back at the coded documentations of what life was like;
So when I get another chance at living, I can do better next time.

Capturing the beauty around me, capturing the soul of that life.
Wanting to relive the beauty, the laughter, the love,
Wanting the joy and pain; Just one more chance.
Then you look at the path before you, walking it is a bittersweet task.
But with these words locked away we can remember but continue to live, That is why my complex mind and light hand chose this legacy to leave.
If a picture is worth a thousand words then a thousand words are worth a life.
I'm simply telling you that the purpose of these writings is so that when we get another chance at living, we wont fail again.
©2006-2009 ~blackred-GlassRose
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Author's Comments

Well ferociouseggplant and I had a bet that he would write a poem with endrhymes and I would write one without and It's not our style but we did it, his was awesome and now here's mine.

Well this is why I write, I write so i can keep my past with me but keep living, because our past always helps us to make our future and because the hardest part of holding on is letting it go..this makes it a bit easier..

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:iconlost-inside-myhead:
lovely..

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I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice
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:heart: avatar by ~Matayu
:iconblackred-glassrose:
Thanks so much!!!! :w00t:

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~Aisha~
"I dreamed a dream in days gone by when hope was high and life was worth living.
I dreamed that love would never die and that God would be forgiving;
My life now is so different from what it seemed. Now...life has killed the dream I dreamed."
:iconmatto-sensei:
A very elegant poem to say the least. *thumbs up* ^___^
:iconsmartster:
^_^ You do rather well with free form. I like the repetition of the word "capturing," emphasizing the point that you're documenting everything so that it's tangible. Who'd have thought you were a philosopher, too, on top of everything else? :XD: Nice job, Aisha.

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:heart: ~13lade6rip & ~Smartster :heart:
:iconblackcatassassin:
As always, I love your poetry, keep up the awsome work

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We are all guaranteed a certian amount of pain in life, but suffering is optional.
:iconlost-inside-myhead:
no problem :hug:

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I tried sniffing coke once, but the ice
cubes stuck in my nose
:crazy:
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(\_/) copy the bunny
(0.o) into your sign
'(__)'help him achieve world domination!!
_____________________
:heart: avatar by ~Matayu
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lovely piece :aww: I like it :D

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"Life's ain't so bad at all. Living off the wall"- "Off The Wall" by Michael Jackson :music:
:iconblackred-glassrose:
lol :D *blushing nad head swelling* coming from you that means so much! Thanks so much for the comment :w00t: :blowkiss:

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~Aisha~
"I dreamed a dream in days gone by when hope was high and life was worth living.
I dreamed that love would never die and that God would be forgiving;
My life now is so different from what it seemed. Now...life has killed the dream I dreamed."
:iconblackred-glassrose:
OMG!!!! THIS IS LIKE THE BEST COMMENT I'VE EVER GOTTEN ON MY WORK!!!! THANKS SO MUCH VERONIKA!!!! :w00t: :w00t: :w00t: yeah this was really damn hard to write though, lol well okay that's exaggerating a bit but it was harder than it usually is to wrte something that's hard for me to write. ?. lol:D anywho, yeah i liek to think about religion and politics and stuff, lol on top of everything else, lol. once again thanks so much!!!!!!!!! :blowkiss: :w00t:

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~Aisha~
"I dreamed a dream in days gone by when hope was high and life was worth living.
I dreamed that love would never die and that God would be forgiving;
My life now is so different from what it seemed. Now...life has killed the dream I dreamed."

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